måndag 14 november 2011

Ben and Danile

En novell som jag skrivit på engelskan som handlar om två enäggstvillingar som lurar en tjej.


Emma was laying on her bed and reading a book when she got a text-messages. She was surprised and she took her mobil phone and read it. The text was from Daniel, the cute guy with dark curly hair and big brown eyes. He was asking if she wanted to meet him at McDonalds tonight.
Emma texted back!

Hi Daniel!
Yes, let’s meet at 18 a clock.
se you<3


Daniel got the messages just after he had sent away one to Emma. He and his twin brother Ben should make up a trick on her.
”Are you ready?? What did she answer? Ben screamed from the hall.
Daniel didn’t want Ben to know that he really liked this girl and that she had written a heart in the text-messages. If he could he should say no to Ben’s plan but, then he could think that he didn’t dare to hurt a girl...!
”Uhmmm... She said yes, you can meet her outside McDonalds in fifteen minutes!

Emma was waiting outside McDonalds. The clock was five past six. He was five minutes late, five minutes! That was not a good start on there first date. She really liked Daniel, and she hoped that he liked her back. Emma checked her face in the little mirror that she held in her hand. The lipgloss that she had put on her lips were shining and she looked very cute.
And there he was, so hansom!
”Come, sit here!!” Emma said with her softest voice.
Daniel looked a bit nervous but he sat down beside her.
”What would you like to eat? I think I will take a cheese-hamburger, and.... a coke!”
”Hmmm, I don’t know, perhaps a chicken-burger. Yes, a chicken-burger! I can order that, Daniel!”She left the table and went to the queue.

Daniel looked around in the big cafeteria on all the peoples. It smelled cheese and meet: this was a wonderful smell, if you asked Ben. Many of them were stressed, but he were here on a tricky date! He knew that Daniel was sitting outside and waiting until Emma should ran out. They had done this trick before on there friends, but this time Daniel wasn’t the same exiting as he always was.

In the middle of his fought Emma came back with two big burgers and one big coke.
”So, why did you wanted to meet me? There was a reason, right?”
”Eehh, not really....!” He saw that Emma got hurted so he was quick with his next line. ” I, just wanted to see you”. He smiled, and Emma smiled back.

This was the best date Emma ever had gone to, and actually the only, but still: a really nice date! Daniel was so cute, and he was so clever, just the kind of guy that Emma liked. And his eyes were so deep dark, like an ocean!
She looked on Daniels face: the hair, his nose, the eyes, the red lips and the chin.
The chin!!!!!
There was a scar on Daniel’s chin, just like the on that Ben had. Emma slowly realised the ugly true about who was sitting there beside her: It was Ben!!
”Oh my god! You are Ben...! What a silly thing to do, you fool! I never want to see you again!”

1 kommentar:

  1. Jag har jobbat mot ett mål som jag nu har klarat. Det var att jag skulle använda och bli säl´krare på engelskan.

    Jag är nöjd med att jag har användt mig av den grammatik som jag har lärt mig.

    SvaraRadera