onsdag 1 februari 2012

Fjord Murder: Summerizer

When the two children, Paul and Jackie, was on a camping-holiday in Norway, they happen to see when a man pull a women down in the water and they go and tell the police. But when the police don´t believe them, Paul and Jackie start locking for murderer by themselves. The only clue they got is that the murder is English and that he and the woman had been in a church not far away from the camping. On a picture from the camera that the woman had, they can see the church and a white Escort. Paul thinks it is the murderers car and he want to get it checked by the police. To their disappointment there is no white, English Escort whit that number plate.

1 kommentar:

  1. A goog summary, but check the verbs. You must write in the same tense (tidsform).

    ---Paul and jackie, were--they happened---a woman---they went and told...the police didn't believe-- started looking---they could----Paul thought it was---wanted--- wasn't any----with---

    SvaraRadera